[redrawn] Yosemite Woodpecker 2

1950 Lincoln Cosmopolitan

My first (and maybe not the last) "Draw this again challenge" contribution.


PC drawing inspired by this one (by KlausAuto) fav.me/db0x1m4


My Original drawing (drawn in 2012 for WDT competition):  fav.me/d65jenj

I'm not sure, whether it is better than the original drawing, or not. Please help me decide.
I know, warped anatomy of the girl is included, as usual.

A4, markers, white chalk pencil and colour pencils, slightly retouched in PS to eliminate scanner mistakes, It took me approx. 25200 seconds _(7×3600)